How are you, Mayleen!

2017-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Creative Writing: If you had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, which would you choose? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ If you had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, which would you choose? If I had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, I definitely choose a satisfying job. It is why the works have to held a pleasure and satisfying myself. A well-paid job firstly is satisfying me, but it will be boring me after a while, because it doesn’t have a pleasure themselves.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^^

Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

To borrow Marino\'s words, you have to do what you have to do.

If sticking it out in a less-than-desirable job means putting food on the table, you do that.

(Gordon Marino, a philosophy professor from St. Olaf College)

I will talk to you again tomorrow!^^

Have a good night!

_T. Mayleen :)

If I had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, I definitely choose a satisfying job.

>> If I had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, I would definitely choose a satisfying job.

It is why the works have to held a pleasure and satisfying myself.

>> It is why working should enjoyable and satisfying.

A well-paid job firstly is satisfying me, but it will be boring me after a while, because it doesn’t have a pleasure themselves.

>> A well-paying job is also satisfying but only in the beginning. It would be boring after a while because you do not feel happy about it.

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