How are you, Mayleen!

2017-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Creative Writing: (Answer in not more than 5 sentences ^-^) If I could make something disappear in my life, what would it be and why I don’t think this matter seriously. But If I could make something disappear only one in my life, I want to remove my age. If I would be young, I want to be professional traveler to get around all over the world and write my adventures.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! (^_-)

Happy Wednesday!

Thank so much for answering your homework.

I would also love to stay young forever. :)

I enjoyed reading your composition.

I will talk to you again on Friday.^^ See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)

I don’t think this matter seriously.

>> I don\'t think this matters seriously.

But If I could make something disappear only one in my life, I want to remove
my age.

>> But if I could make something disappear in my life, I would want my age to be changed.

If I would be young, I want to be professional traveler to get around all over the world and write my adventures.

>> If I would be young, I\'d travel all around the world and write about my adventures.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기