How are you, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^^
Happy Thursday! (^_^)/
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
I have read it well and I quite agree with your opinion.
Innovation is really important these days.
I will talk to you again tomorrow.^^ See you then!
Enjoy the rest of the day!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I believe technology is good.
>> I believe technology is a good thing.
If we didn’t improve technology, we maybe couldn’t develop civilization.
>> If we didn\'t develop technology, we couldn\'t have improved our civilizations.
Besides, development of technology made our life being more and more convenient.
>> Besides, the development of technology made our life more and more convenient.
Technology innovation will change our life into material wealth.
>> Technology innovation will lead our lives into a more productive future.
A nations being richness and poverty depend on advances in technology.
>> A nation\'s monetary status depends on how advanced its technology is.
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