How are you, Mayleen!

2017-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Creative Writing] What springs to mind when you hear the word 'technology'? Answer in not more than 5 sentences. ^-^ I believe technology is good. If we didn’t improve technology, we maybe couldn’t develop civilization. Besides, development of technology made our life being more and more convenient. Technology innovation will change our life into material wealth. A nations being richness and poverty depend on advances in technology.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^^

Happy Thursday! (^_^)/


Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.

I have read it well and I quite agree with your opinion.

Innovation is really important these days.

I will talk to you again tomorrow.^^ See you then!

Enjoy the rest of the day!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


I believe technology is good.

>> I believe technology is a good thing.


If we didn’t improve technology, we maybe couldn’t develop civilization.

>> If we didn\'t develop technology, we couldn\'t have improved our civilizations.


Besides, development of technology made our life being more and more convenient.

>> Besides, the development of technology made our life more and more convenient.


Technology innovation will change our life into material wealth.

>> Technology innovation will lead our lives into a more productive future.


A nations being richness and poverty depend on advances in technology.

>> A nation\'s monetary status depends on how advanced its technology is.

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