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2017-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What images spring to mind when you hear the word 'war'? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^_- War springs to my mind with disasters. Our nation was undergone civil war during 3 years Civil war between south and north korea started from 1950. Our nation was devastated completely, but we were recovered by assistance of a friendly nation. Definitely, I think that war have to be driven out in the world.

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Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^_^) Happy Monday!


\"War victims - - who carry the bitter knowledge that no limits exist for what can be done to people without power - - beg resonant \"why?\" or \"why me?\" questions that address a moral domain.\" (ncbi.nlm.nih.gov)

Millions of children and young people worldwide are affected by armed conflict.

They are confronted with physical harm, violence, danger, exploitation, fear and loss.


Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.^^

See you again on Wednesday!


_T. Mayleen :)


War springs to my mind with disasters.

>> Correct!

OR: Every time I think of war, disasters also come to mind.


Our nation was undergone civil war during 3 years

>> My country underwent a civil war for 3 years.


Civil war between south and north korea started from 1950.

>> The civil war between North and South Korea began in 1950.


Our nation was devastated completely, but we were recovered by assistance of a friendly nation.

>> Our nation was devastated completely, but we recovered by the assistance of a friendly nation.


Definitely, I think that war have to be driven out in the world.

>> Correct!

OR: Definitely, war should have never existed.

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