How are you, Mayleen!
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Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^-^
Happy Monday!
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
You did a good job here. I totally agree with your opinion.
I will talk to you again on Wednesday. See you then!
Good night! :)
...Teacher Mayleen...
In my opinion, earning much money definitely shouldn’t be success.
>> In my opinion, earning much money shouldn’t be the basis of success.
Money can play an important role in life, but it has little to do with success.
>> Money plays an important role in life, but it has little to do with success.
If earning much money is success, what do you think that someone have cheated on a person and as a result, he earned much money.
>> If earning much money means success, what do you think about people who\'ve cheater others just to gain a lot of money?
I think it is important how to earn money and how to use it.
>> I think that how you earn and how you use money are important.
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