How are you, Mayleen!

2017-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What do you think is the most serious problem in the world? What can we do as individuals to solve this problem? Answer in not more than 5 sentences. ^_^ I think the most serious problem in the world is North Korea nuclear weapons. Mr kim Jeong En who is the most powerful man in North Korea fights against the world, specially US. In my opinion, the solution of this problem is only communication, never physical clashes. Physical fighting will reach the end of our nation and this planet.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^_^)/

Happy Thursday!

Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

It is one of the hottest issues now.

I don\'t really get Kim Jong Un\'s reason or purpose for the things he\'s doing.

Anyway, I will talk to you then again tomorrow. :)

_T. Mayleen :)

I think the most serious problem in the world is North Korea nuclear weapons.

>> I think the most serious problem in the world now is North Korea\'s threat of nuclear attacks.

Mr kim Jeong En who is the most powerful man in North Korea fights against the world, specially US.

>> Kim Jong Un, who is the most powerful person in North Korea, wants to fight against other nations such as the US.

In my opinion, the solution of this problem is only communication, never physical clashes.

>> In my opinion, the solution to this problem is communication, never physical clashes.

Physical fighting will reach the end of our nation and this planet.

>> War will only destroy our nation and this planet.

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