How are you, Mayleen!

2017-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Think about something you would like to say in this situation: -You are invited to dinner with a government leader. You want to express your opinion about something political, something you wish could be changed. Limit your answer to 5 or 6 sentences only.^_^ I want to say that you don’t have to change the system of university entrance examinations. In my nation, the system of university entrance examinations change very frequently. I think there's no royal road to the system of university entrance examinations. I believe that the breaking of academical cliquism is only method to a welfare state and steady system of university entrance examinations.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^___^/

Happy Monday!


Thank you for answering your homework.

A university entrance exam is a standardized aptitude test.

We can talk about this on Wednesday. See you then!


\"Most teachers emphasize that if we failed Suneung, the rest of our lives would be failure, because the test is the first (and last) step to our successful lives,\" said Sina Kim, a 25-year-old currently looking for a job. The exam is seen as \"the final goal and final determinant of our lives. We thought that if we successfully finish the test, then the bright future would automatically follow.\" (The Atlantic)


_T. Mayleen :)


I want to say that you don’t have to change the system of university entrance examinations.

>> I would tell him that he doesn\'t have to change the system for university entrance examinations.


In my nation, the system of university entrance examinations change very
frequently.

>> In my nation, the system for university entrance examinations changes very
frequently.


I think there\'s no royal road to the system of university entrance examinations.

>> I think that there should be no exclusivity in entering universities.


I believe that the breaking of academical cliquism is only method to a welfare state and steady system of university entrance examinations.

>> I believe that breaking academic cliquism is the only method to establish a steady system for university entrance examinations.

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