How are you, Mayleen!

2017-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Howard Gardner created the theory of multiple intelligences. The theory says that there are 8 different types of intelligence (logical-mathematical, spatial, linguistic, bodily-kinesthetic, musical, interpersonal, intrapersonal, naturalistic). QUESTION: Which intelligence is the one that is usually thought of as the most important? Which one is the least important? Answer in not more than 5 sentences I think multiple intelligences are all important, but if I would choose one of them, it may be logical-mathematical because of base one among 8 different types of intelligence. As people grow up, importance of intelligences changed with each individual differently. And in my thought, the least important one is nothing why intelligences are different from each other.

강사 첨삭

Good evening. Mr. [Name]! ^_-

Happy Tuesday!

Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your opinion.

I guess you\'re right. All these types are equally relevant.

I will see you then again tomorrow. I want you to have a good night!^^

_T. Mayleen :)

I think multiple intelligences are all important, but if I would choose one of them, it may be logical-mathematical because of base one among 8 different types of intelligence.

>> I think these types of intelligence are all important, but if I had to choose one of them, I would choose logical-mathematical because it is like the basis of the other 7 types.

As people grow up, importance of intelligences changed with each individual differently.

>> As people grow older, the importance of intelligence vary with each individual.

And in my thought, the least important one is nothing why intelligences are different from each other.

>> In my opinion, there\'s no least important for these types are all different from each other.

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