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2017-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Talk about the significance of persimmon in Korean. Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ Persimmon is a ordinary fruit in Korea. Persimmon tree is usually planted in a old farmhouse and it isn’t economical efficiency tree. In autumn, we can see a ripe persimmon turning yellow color in countryside. Besides, persimmon is a typical fruit in Korea as if coconut and banana are a typical fruit in Philippines.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,

Happy Monday!

In Korea, autumn is the only season persimmons are plentiful.
Persimmon is a Buddhist symbol of transformation.
The persimmon tree is used as a metaphor for the fact that people must undergo education so that they can become proper members of society.

(mystickorea.blogspot)

Thank you for doing your homework.

I will talk to you later in class.^^ See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)

Persimmon is a ordinary fruit in Korea.

>> Persimmon is an ordinary fruit in Korea.

Persimmon tree is usually planted in a old farmhouse and it isn’t economical efficiency tree.

>> Persimmon trees are usually planted in old farms and these trees aren\'t economically efficient.

In autumn, we can see a ripe persimmon turning yellow color in countryside.

>> In autumn, we can see ripe persimmons in the countryside.

Besides, persimmon is a typical fruit in Korea as if coconut and banana are a typical fruit in Philippines.

>> Persimmon is a typical fruit in Korea just like banana and coconut in the Philippines.

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