How are you, Mayleen!
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^-^ Happy Thursday!
We may still weigh the costs and benefits of doing something risky, seeing someone we know taking the risk can be a powerful inducement to try it ourselves.
We take risks because we want to gain from it one way or another, and think experience is a good measure of its actual risk.
Thank you for this composition.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I think that peoples are almost risk-oriented in youth, there are why they are young and are filled with courage and can make a challenges as well.
>> I think that the younger generation is more risk-oriented because they\'re young and filled with courage to face challenges.
Besides, if they are failed their challenges, they have the time to recover their faults.
>> Besides, if ever they\'d fail a challenge, they would have plenty of time to recover.
But they are more older, they are changing more risk-averse because of opposite reason being described above.
>> But for the older generation, they become risk-averse as oppose to the reasons above.
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