How are you,Mayleen!

2017-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: We all have goals and talking about them actually gets us more encouraged to do something about them. Sharing goals is also a good thing to help get them done. Question: Should parents help their children set goals? Express your opinion in not more than 5 sentences. ^-^ I think that parents should necessarily help setting their children goals. Parents could help setting their children goals by many different types, such as reading guidance about the biography of a great man and career. Parents can say to their children about their experiences and how should they prepare for their future lives. In my experience, as long as parents have more interesting, their children are easy better setting goals and more coming true their dreams.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^


Parents are important and influential advisors to their children when it comes to choosing a course of study.


I think it is important to encourage children to aspire towards whatever they would like to be and have a variety of different options to choose from.

That way, they can end up getting a satisfactory job, if not a dream job. [Linked In]


Thank you for doing your homework.

See you later in class!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


I think that parents should necessarily help setting their children goals.

>> I think that parents should necessarily help in setting their children\'s goals.


Parents could help setting their children goals by many different types, such as reading guidance about the biography of a great man and career.
>> Parents could help in setting goals for their children in many different ways such as reading them a biography of someone successful.


Parents can say to their children about their experiences and how should they prepare for their future lives.
>> Parents could share their children experiences they\'ve had and give tips on how to prepare for their future.


In my experience, as long as parents have more interesting, their children are easy better setting goals and more coming true their dreams.

>> In my experience, as long as parents and children have get along well, it\'s easier to set goals or dreams.

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