How are you, mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: What do you think is the most dangerous form of transportation? Why?
I think that the most dangerous form of transportation is airplane.
that ‘s why all peoples could make a mistake and the pilot also is people,
In-flight accident should end up dying.
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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^
Thank you for answering your homework.
I respect your opinion and I actually quite agree.
When you\'re up there, your life\'s at risk.
Anyway, I will just talk to you again tomorrow. ^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I think that the most dangerous form of transportation is airplane.
>>> CORRECT!
that ‘s why all peoples could make a mistake and the pilot also is people,
In-flight accident should end up dying.
>>> People make mistakes so even the pilot could commit errors that would lead to losing lives.
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