How are you, Mayleen!

2017-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Your shoes reveal your personality. Your choice in footwear can give people a sneak peek into your inner self. According to psychologists, apart from the style of your footwear, its color and condition also tells a lot about you. [Source: The Times of India] QUESTION: Do you prefer comfortable boring shoes or uncomfortable fashionable shoes? | definitely prefer comfortable boring shoes than uncomfortable fashionable shoes. Though they like uncomfortable fashionable shoes when they young, they like to be comfortable boring shoes when they grow older. being comfortable is always good.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Monday!


Thank you so much for doing your homework.

Me too, I would rather wear comfortable boring shoes.

I am quite active so I tend to move a lot.

I wouldn\'t be able to run around if I\'m wearing platform shoes or high heels. ^_^

See you later in class.^^


_Teacher Mayleen :)


| definitely prefer comfortable boring shoes than uncomfortable fashionable shoes.

>>> CORRECT!


Though they like uncomfortable fashionable shoes when they young, they like to be comfortable boring shoes when they grow older.

>>> Though they liked uncomfortable fashionable shoes when they were young, they\'d prefer comfortable boring shoes when they grow older.


being comfortable is always good.

>>> Being comfortable feels good.

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