How are you, Mayleen!

2017-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: If war broke out in your country would you rather flee the country or fight? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ I think that maybe not only me but also most young people are going to fight. Young people are selfish, but they are more patriotic than we think. Although, they seem to be something lacking and comfortable to persue, but young people seem to be very patriotic. So I am not worried if our nation is a little confused and Mr. [Name] tested nuclear experiments.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

You\'re right, young people these days are more courageous.

Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

I will talk to you again on Wednesday.^^ See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)

I think that maybe not only me but also most young people are going to fight.
>> I think not only but almost all young people would fight.

Young people are selfish, but they are more patriotic than we think.
>> CORRECT!

>> The young people may seem selfish, but they are more patriotic than we think.

Although, they seem to be something lacking and comfortable to persue, but young people seem to be very patriotic.
>> Although they seem to be lacking something and hard to persuade, but they\'re very patriotic.

So I am not worried if our nation is a little confused and Mr. [Name] tested nuclear experiments.

>> CORRECT!

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