How are you, Mayleen!

2017-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Halloween It is a celebration observed in a number of countries on 31st of October. It begins the three-day observance of Allhallowtide, the time in the liturgical year dedicated to remembering the dead, including saints (hallows), martyrs, and all the faithful departed. QUESTION: If you could choose to be any monster or creature, what would it be? I don’t know what kind of masks they use on Halloween Day. But if I choose a mask, I would like to wear a human skeleton and a cloak, because it represents the great potato famine in Ireland at 1850s. therefore they moved to America, and then they made Halloween Day celebrations.

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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^-^

A happy Tuesday to you!

Thank you for doing your homework.^^ Even you don\'t celebrate Halloween in your country, it\'s good that you\'re aware about things related to it. It\'s the 31st of October so Happy Halloween! ^^,)

See you tomorrow!

_T. Mayleen :)

I don’t know what kind of masks they use on Halloween Day.

>>> Correct!

But if I choose a mask, I would like to wear a human skeleton and a cloak, because it represents the great potato famine in Ireland at 1850s.

>>> But if I were to wear a costume, I would like to wear a human skeleton attire and a cloak because it represents the great Irish potato famine in 1850\'s.

therefore they moved to America, and then they made Halloween Day celebrations.

>>> They then moved to America and celebrated Halloween there.

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