How are you, Mayleen!

2017-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What technology helps you to be productive? Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. ^-^ I think it depends on their profession, For teachers, I am sure that teaching skills are the most important thing in helping students that improve their creativity. Specially, reading skills in students are also important to improving creativity in youth. Personally, I think speaking skills are the most necessary technology to me.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Thursday!

Thank you for answering your homework.

When it comes to productivity both in and out of the workplace, technology is sort of a double-edged sword. While it can certainly make life easier, it can also create distractions that ultimately eat away at your productivity. (Timeular)

I will talk to you again tomorrow.^^

_T. Mayleen :)

I think it depends on their profession,

>>> Correct!

USE THE CORRECT PUNCTUATION MARK.

For teachers, I am sure that teaching skills are the most important thing in helping students that improve their creativity.

>>> For teachers, I am sure that teaching skills are the most important thing in helping students improve their creativity.

Specially, reading skills in students are also important to improving creativity in youth.

>>> For example, reading skill of students is also important to improve creativity.

Personally, I think speaking skills are the most necessary technology to me.

>>> Personally, I think speaking skill is the most necessary tool for me.

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