How are you, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)
I hope you\'re right about this.
They must learn from our present mistakes.
There\'s only one Earth and ruining our planet means uncertainty of our children\'s future.
_T. Mayleen :)
I think that our descendants will love and preserve the earth more than we do.
>>> Correct!
Our generation has destroyed the earth extensively by using fossil fuels and chemical products that do not decompose
>>> Correct!
In youth, our children may love the earth less, but as they get older, they preserve the planet better and pass it over to their future gneration.
>>> It may seem that our children care less about our planet, but as they grow older, they\'ll preserve the planet and pass it over to their future generation.
So they will realize that there is only one planet.
>>> They will then realize that there is only one Earth.
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