How are you, Mayleen!

2017-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What are some reason why people argue? Give at least two (2) answers. The main reason why people argue is that they disagree with each other and they don’t know each other halfway. I think there is always a conflict in life, but the important thing is to make up.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Thursday!


Thank you for doing your homework.

People argue for different reasons.
Some people argue because they like to argue and to win.
They like the sense of power it gives them.


I\'ll see you then tomorrow.^^


_T. Mayleen :)


The main reason why people argue is that they disagree with each other and they don’t know each other halfway.

>>> The main reason why people argue is that they disagree with each other and they don\'t want to meet halfway.

I think there is always a conflict in life, but the important thing is to make up.

>>> I think there will always be conflicts in life, but the important thing is to reconcile after.

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