How are you, Mayleen!

2017-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Choose one (1) topic and discuss whether you agree or disagree. Limit your answers to 5 to 6 sentences only. ^-^ 1. Public prayer should not be allowed in schools. 2. Teachers should not be allowed to contact students through social media. 3. All parents should be required to attend parenting classes before having a child. 1. Public prayer should not be allowed in schools. I agree with this sentence “ Public prayer should not be allowed in schools” Our country is allowed to accept all religious beliefs, so I believe that public prayer in certain religions is not right. Even though schools founded by a certain religious foundation, the students often have different religions.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Thursday!

Thank you for doing your homework.

I respect your opinion because you\'re entitled to it.

I will see you later in class.^^ Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)

I agree with this sentence “ Public prayer should not be allowed in schools”

>>> Correct!
Our country is allowed to accept all religious beliefs, so I believe that public prayer in certain religions is not right.

>>> My country allows all religious beliefs, so I believe that public prayer of certain religions is not right in respect to others religious groups.
Even though schools founded by a certain religious foundation, the students often have different religions.

>>> Even though some schools are founded by religious groups, students often have different religions.

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