How are you, Mayleen!

2017-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Creative Writing: How often do you practice your English? What is your favorite way to practice your English? The only time I use English is the mobile phone English language class. I have a phone English conversation three times a week for 10 minutes. I want to study English immersion, but I do not allow the circumstances. I want to go to a short language training course to learn English conversation, but I am really sorry that I can not.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^^

Happy Tuesday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.^^

I have read it well. I\'ve made some modifications though.

We can discuss this in class if you want to.

See you then tomorrow! ^-^


_T. Mayleen :)


The only time I use English is the mobile phone English language class.

>>> The only time I practice English is through this mobile phone class.
I have a phone English conversation three times a week for 10 minutes.

>>> CORRECT!
I want to study English immersion, but I do not allow the circumstances.

>>> I want to immerse in studying English, but I couldn\'t allow the circumstances.
I want to go to a short language training course to learn English conversation, but I am really sorry that I can not.

>>> I want to take a short language training course to improve my English skills, but I feel sorry that I cannot do it now.

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