How are you, Mayleen!

2017-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Answer each question in 2 to 3 sentences.^-^ A. What is the best/most important thing your culture has given to the world? B. What is the best/most important thing your culture/country has adopted from another culture? A. What is the best/most important thing your culture has given to the world? I don't think there is much to boast about our culture. However, I think K-pop is affecting the world recently. B. What is the best/most important thing your culture/country has adopted from another culture? I believe that our nation has adopted a democratic system of governance. We changed from the system ruled by kings to the form of democracy. Although there was a trial and error, I think democracy was settled fast.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Mr. [Name]! ^^,) Happy Friday!

Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

You did a good job here!^^

Our class is already over, so we\'ll just discuss this one on Monday.

See you then. Have a great weekend!

_T. Mayleen :)

A. What is the best/most important thing your culture has given to the world?

I don\'t think there is much to boast about our culture.

>>> Correct!
However, I think K-pop is affecting the world recently.

>>> Correct!

B. What is the best/most important thing your culture/country has adopted from another culture?

I believe that our nation has adopted a democratic system of governance.

>>> Correct!
We changed from the system ruled by kings to the form of democracy.

>>> We changed from monarchy to democracy.
Although there was a trial and error, I think democracy was settled fast.

>>> Although there were some imperfections, I think democracy settled fast.

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