How are you, Mayleen!
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Aging brings wisdom. People definitely do get wiser as they get older. This is because life teaches lessons to people in all aspects of life -- relationships, jobs, and economics in particular. Experience is a teacher to all, and sometimes that experience comes in the form of hard-learned lessons. The young people simply do not have this kind of wisdom. [debate.org]
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_Teacher Mayleen :)
In a young age, people act fairly, and the world looks fair, and their behavior is unaffected by the economic status, regardless of the economic status.
>>> In their youth, people act fairly, and the world looks fair, and their behavior is unaffected by their economic status.
However, as they grow older, they become a lot of restrictions depending on economic conditions.
>>> However, as they grow older, a lot of restrictions arise depending on their economic condition.
This is a fact that has never changed historically, and it is my experience.
>>> This is a fact that has never changed through history, and it is based from my experience.
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