How are you preparing for retirement?
학생이 쓴 원문
Honestly,I love what I'm doing now.
I've worked for several companies and all the jobs were basically same_corresponding with overseas' buyers and trading products.
However, in most cases, I couldn't fully use my abilities_several foreign languages.
But now I finally find a job which requires all of my ablities and it's always challenging and fascinating me.
Unfortuanately, I don't believe that the companies in Korea take care of its employee until their retirement.
That's why I can't get out of the concerning of my old age.
Even though I like my job so much, maybe I can do my job during time allowed by my company.
Also I have a dream what I'm interested in for a long time.
So far, I didn't do anything for that, but I think I will be led when I'm natually inspired.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you for sharing. I glad that you found a job wherein you can be able to apply your capabilities. I am sure that you enjoy your job right now. I hope you can be able to do the thing you wanted to do before it\'s to late. See you!
T.Faye
Honestly,I love what I\'m doing now.
>>Correct!I\'ve worked for several companies and all the jobs were basically same_corresponding with overseas\' buyers and trading products.
>>I\'ve worked for several companies and all the jobs were basically the same with corresponding with overseas buyers and trading products.However, in most cases, I couldn\'t fully use my abilities_several foreign languages.
>> However, most of the time I couldn\'t fully use my abilities on several foreign languages.But now I finally find a job which requires all of my ablities and it\'s always challenging and fascinating me.>> But now, I finally found a job which requires all my skills and it\'s always challeging and fascinating to me.Unfortuanately, I don\'t believe that the companies in Korea take care of its employee until their retirement.
>> Unfortuanately, I don\'t believe that companies in Korea can take good care of its employees until their retirement. That\'s why I can\'t get out of the concerning of my old age.
>> That\'s why I can\'t get away because of my old age.Even though I like my job so much, maybe I can do my job during time allowed by my company.
>> Even though I like my job so much, maybe I can only do my job until the time the company won\'t be needing my service.Also I have a dream what I\'m interested in for a long time.
>> Also, I had a dream on what I am interested to do after a long years.So far, I didn\'t do anything for that, but I think I will be led when I\'m natually inspired.
>> So far, I haven\'t done anything of that until now but I think I will be motivated to do it if I get inspired.
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