how are you teacher MAYLEEN. I am [Name] son
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Do you have any phobias?
How can someone confront and overcome a phobia?
I think I have a bit of agoraphobia,
I feel nervous and vibrate voices whenever I talk a front of peoples.
there are some method how to overcome phobia
1.It could be reduced with mind control.
2.It could be immuined with exposing real situation slowly.
3.reducing phobia is going to Psychiatry.
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Good evening, Mr. [Name]!
Happy Monday!
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Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
Good job, Mr. [Name].
I, too, have some fears like fear of heights and stage fright.
Just like what you\'ve said, there are ways to overcome it.
If you get nervous when talking in front of an audience, imagine thet you\'re alone inside that room or venue. :)
_T. Mayleen :)
I think I have a bit of agoraphobia,
>> I think I have a bit of agoraphobia.
I feel nervous and vibrate voices whenever I talk a front of peoples.
>> I feel nervous and I stutter whenever I talk in from of many people.there are some method how to overcome phobia
>> They are some ways to overcome phobia.1.It could be reduced with mind control.
>> Correct!2.It could be immuined with exposing real situation slowly.
>> You could be immuned by slowly exposing yourself to your phobia.3.reducing phobia is going to Psychiatry.
>> Another way is to consult a psychiatrist.
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