how are you teacher MAYLEEN. I am [Name] son
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Why are selfies so popular? Are there places you should never take selfies?
I saw “selfie” for the first time.
selfie means self-ca in our country, therefore koreans called selca(short for self-camera).
It is very popular in korea because making a pose comically and taking photos anywhere, taking off photos.
I think that selfie is controlled in places such as special museum and an exhibition hall and galleries because of violation the rights to one's portrait.
I am sure that It is prohibited military zone and places preserved industrial points, etc.
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Hello there, Mr. [Name]! ^_^
Happy Thursday to you!
Thank you so much for this composition.
I liked the way you shared your ideas and I definitely agree with all the things you\'ve written.
I have made some modifications though.
See you in our next class. Enjoy the rest of the day! :)
_T. Mayleen ^.^
I saw “selfie” for the first time.
>> Correct!
OR: It\'s my first time to encounter the word \"selfie\".
selfie means self-ca in our country, therefore koreans called selca(short for self-camera).
>> Selfie means self-camera in our country, therefore, we call it \'selca\'.
It is very popular in korea because making a pose comically and taking photos anywhere, taking off photos.
>> Taking photos anywhere is very popular in Korea because they can use any pose they want to.
I think that selfie is controlled in places such as special museum and an exhibition hall and galleries because of violation the rights to one\'s portrait.
>> I think that taking selfies should be controlled in places such as museums, exhibition halls, and galleries so not to violate the artists\' rights.
I am sure that It is prohibited military zone and places preserved industrial points, etc.
>> I am also sure that it is prohibited in military zones and preserved industrial points.
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