how are you teacher MAYLEEN. I am [Name] son
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Is underpopulation a problem? Are there any positive things about overpopulation
underpopulation may cause so many problems.
first, it means weakness of energy supporting the society,
therefore it will be reduced economic growth rate and cause labor shortage, besides it should induce social unrest because of Conflict between generations, etc.
I am sure that overpopulation is more an evil influence than positive aspect.
positive aspect is only that industrialists will employ with more affordable salaries.
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Hi there, Mr. [Name]! ^.^
Happy Monday!
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I can say that you are really into social, economical, and political issues.
Writing compositions like this can help you improve your grammar and vocabulary so keep it up.
See you on Wednesday! ^^
_T. Mayleen :)
underpopulation may cause so many problems.
>> Correct!
Capitalize the first letter of your sentence. [Underpopulation]first, it means weakness of energy supporting the society,
>> First, it means weaker or lesser amnpower.therefore it will be reduced economic growth rate and cause labor shortage, besides it should induce social unrest because of Conflict between generations, etc.
>> Therefore, it could lead to reduced economic growth rate and labor shortage. Also, it could induce social unrest due to conflict between generations.I am sure that overpopulation is more an evil influence than positive aspect.
>> I am sure that overpopulation is more of a bad thing than a good thing.positive aspect is only that industrialists will employ with more affordable salaries.
>> It\'s only advantage is that businessmen could employ more though for a more affordable salary.
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