how are you teacher MAYLEEN. I am [Name] son

2016-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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What are the risks of not taking risks? we generally hesitate to make choice because of fear of failure. If we might take a advice about something, they could say the solution gained through their experience. But everyone don′t know futur′s thing. Fear of failure is overstated through human′experience. I thought that we should be ready to suffer from failure. Because we will be going to get more repentance of not taking risks. We should learn form the success such as the Apple, Facebook, Amazone, Goole, Alibaba etc.

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Good afternoon! Hello, Mr. [Name]! :) Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. You did well. You shared your ideas and I really appreciate it. I have made some modifications thought. See you tomorrow! :)   _T. Mayleen (^_^)//   we generally hesitate to make choice because of fear of failure. >> We generally hesitate to make choices because of fear of failure. If we might take a advice about something, they could say the solution gained through their experience.>> There a famous advice or saying; experience is the best teacher.   But everyone don′t know futur′s thing. >> But everyone\'s unsure of what will happen in the future. Fear of failure is overstated through human′experience. >> Fear of failure is overstated through experiences. I thought that we should be ready to suffer from failure. >> Correct! Because we will be going to get more repentance of not taking risks. >> Because we will regret more if we did not take the risks. We should learn form the success such as the Apple, Facebook, Amazone, Goole, Alibaba etc. >> We should learn from the success of the people behind Apple, Facebook, Amazon, Google, Alibaba, etc.

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