how are you teacher MAYLEEN. I am [Name] son

2016-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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If you had one wish, what would it be? If I have one wish, it is to increase wish endlessly.(joke) Our nation′s wish is the reunification of North and South Korea. But personally, If I have one wish, it is to travel all over the world. I really want to go backpacking through many countries. Especially, I hope to visit Machu Picchu in Peru.

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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^^   A happy Thursday to you!   Your wish is achieveable. :) You can definitely do that in the future. Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. We can talk about Machu Picchu tomorrow. We\'ll discuss the reason why you want to go there.^^ See you then!^^   _T. Mayleen :)     If I have one wish, it is to increase wish endlessly.(joke) >> If I had one wish, it would be to have endless or unlimited wishes. (just kidding) Our nation′s wish is the reunification of North and South Korea. >> Correct! OR: Our nation wishes to reunite North and South Korea. But personally, If I have one wish, it is to travel all over the world. >> But personally if I had one wish, it is to travel all over the world. I really want to go backpacking through many countries. >> I really want to go backpacking in other countries. Especially, I hope to visit Machu Picchu in Peru. >> Correct! OR: I really want to visit Machu Picchu in Peru.

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