how are you teacher MAYLEEN. I am [Name] son

2016-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Can you talk about three things that scare you? It is numbness of my mind in the most of all. Firstly,It′s forgeting to look back my life. Second, It′s forgeting my standing place and to retire from current position some times. Finally, It′s deceived by temptation of evil in my mind.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon!^^ Happy Monday, Mr. [Name]! :)   Thank you for accomplishing your homework. Your thoughts were really deep. I guess it shows how matured you are, mentally and emotionally. We all have fears; fears that we must face and overcome. See you again on Wednesday.^^   _T. Mayleen^^   It is numbness of my mind in the most of all. >> It is mental deterioration that I fear the most. Firstly,It′s forgeting to look back my life. >> First, it\'s forgetting to look back on my life. Second, It′s forgeting my standing place and to retire from current position some times. >> Second, it\'s forgetting my place and retiring from my current job. Finally, It′s deceived by temptation of evil in my mind. >> Last, it\'s being deceived by temptation or the evil in my mind.

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