How are you the same and different with your brother?

2021-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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It seemed a little difficult for me to answer, so I asked my mom and she said: \"me and my younger brother have the same faces but have very different personalities.\" my younger sibling is still active, but he still has a slightly modest side and a lot of scares, but I really have a perfectly active side, and I\'m not afraid of anything except ghosts. Ah!! Except for insects to...

강사 첨삭

Greetings Maria!

I think here on the photos that you sent, you look very alike! In class awhile back, your similarities were not quite obvious. I think it takes some time to really see the physical characteristics that are the same and also with your characters.

I am glad to see these photos and have read and checked your composition. 

See you then.

-T. Donna =)

It seemed a little difficult for me to answer, so I asked my mom and she said: \"me and my younger brother have the same faces but have very different personalities.\" 
>> Correct!

my younger sibling is still active, but he still has a slightly modest side and a lot of scares, but I really have a perfectly active side, and I\'m not afraid of anything except ghosts. Ah!! Except for insects to...
>> My younger sibling is still active but he still has a slightly modest side and a lot of phobias.  But, I really have a perfectly active side, and I\'m not afraid of anything except ghosts. Ah!! Except for insects.

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