how are you today?

2010-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 michaelA

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Good morning.lei.~ How are you today? Are you Ok? what happened to you? what makes you got a cold? ㅠ ㅠ your voice said to me you were so sick. i hope you are ok today. today we are under the thyphoon. the name is Dianmu. China came foward the name to this thyphoon. it means goddess who controls thunder and lightning. this morning i got the damage from the thyphoon. during the wating the bus, i wet whole my suit. there were strong wind and heavy rain at that time.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for your concern. I am still sick today but I can still manage it. I am so sorry to hear about what happened. I am hoping that you brought an extra suit for the day. I hope you are okay. Take care and I will talk to you tomorrow. Lei :-) Good morning.lei.~>>correct^^ How are you today? Are you Ok?>>correct^^ what happened to you? what makes you got a cold?>>what happened to you? How did you catch a cold? your voice said to me you were so sick.>>your voice shows that you were sick. i hope you are ok today.>>correct^^ today we are under the thyphoon.  >>we are having a typhoon today. the name is Dianmu.  >>correct^^ China came foward the name to this thyphoon.  >>China gave the typhoon name. it means the goddess who controls thunder and lightning. >>correct^^ this morning i got the damage from the thyphoon. >>I had some inconvenience due to the typhoon this morning . during the wating the bus, i wet whole my suit.  >>while waiting for the bus, my whole suit got wet. there were strong wind and heavy rain at that time. >>The wind was strong and it was raining heavily.

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