How are your friendships different now than they were when you were a child?
학생이 쓴 원문
When we were a children, we played always in the park on weekend. And we were very active. Now we are like more talking. Just playing in the park is ver boring and we don\'t like it.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daisy. Happy Tuesday!
Thank you for sharing your answer with me. You did great, sweetie. Young adults like to talk more than play in the park. I hope you can have a meaningful conversation with your friends and you can give good advice to each other. ^_^
~Teacher Erin
When we were a children,
>>Before, when we were still young,
we played always in the park on weekend.
>>we always played in the park every weekend.
And we were very active.
>>CORRECT
Now we are like more talking.
>>Now that we are all grown-ups, we like to talk more.
Just playing in the park is ver boring and we don\'t like it.
>>It\'s boring to play in the park, and we don\'t like it.
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