How are your friendships different now than they were when you were a child?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a child, friends are a very big part of my life and I wanted to share everything with them and for them to have same opinions with me on various topics.
Sometimes I was so disappointed and persuaded them to change their opinions as same with mines.
But it\'s very hard to make them to change their opinions as those are the results of their own experiences also I realized that to do that isn\'t right way to maintain good friendships.
So I decided to apprise friends\' opinions even those are different from mines.
Although the time to have fun with my friends has been decreased due to our own work and life, the time with them is still happy and precious as same as it was when I was a child.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. This is a great read. It is not really easy to find time for other people these days because of our busy schedules but I hope you get to spend more time with your friends again.^^ Thank you for this and I will talk to you soon. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
When I was a child, friends are a very big part of my life and I wanted to share everything with them and for them to have same opinions with me on various topics.
>>> When I was a child, friends are a very big part of my life and I wanted to share everything with them and for them to have the same opinions as me on various topics.
Sometimes I was so disappointed and persuaded them to change their opinions as same with mines.
>>> Sometimes I was so disappointed and persuaded them to change their opinions to be the same as mine.
But it\'s very hard to make them to change their opinions as those are the results of their own experiences also I realized that to do that isn\'t right way to maintain good friendships.
>>> But it\'s very hard to make them change their opinions as those are the results of their own experiences. Also, I realized that to do that is not the right way to maintain good friendships.
So I decided to apprise friends\' opinions even those are different from mines.
>>> So I decided to apprise friends\' opinions even those are different from mine.
Although the time to have fun with my friends has been decreased due to our own work and life, the time with them is still happy and precious as same as it was when I was a child.
>>> Although these days, do not spend much time to have fun due to our work and life, the time I spent with them is still happy and precious as it was when we were children.
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