How can a joke hurt someone?
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There is no need to say. Joke can be a assault on somebody.
>>> There is no need to say. Joke can be an assault to somebody.
Even if it is not intended, It can hurt somebody’s heart.
>>> correct
Joke can be a attect when they contain discrimiation or sarcastic connotation.
>>> Joke can be an attack when they contain discrimination or sarcastic connotation.
For example, racist make fun of the look of people who come from asia.
>>> For example, racist make fun of the looks of other people who comes from Asia.
They ridicule the split eyes of us, and it is very unfair because we can not change our looks.
>>> They ridicule the way our eyes look. It is very unfair because we cannot change the way we look.
Some people have a quite dig at others with joke.
>>> correct
When the offended people take it seriously, then they can get a huge scarce.
>>> When the offended person take it seriously, then they can get a huge scarce.
We need to take care more about feeling of others and avoid the small discrimination and sarcasm.
>>> We need to take more care about the feelings of others and avoid small discrimination and sarcasm.
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