How can a smile communicate feelings or intentions without words? Can a smile sometimes say more tha
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I think smile can sometimes say more than words. We have \"Silent is gold\", \"To keep up save words\" in Korea. Sometimes smile is appropriate more than thousand of words.When I smile in the right place at the right time It could be good influence. Also smile is good expression. It\'s good for health and sociability. I\'m not smiling because I\'m happy, I\'m happy because I\'m smiling.
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Hey, Ji Yun. Your writing skills are showing great potential! You’ve been successfully applying grammar rules and can construct clear, well-organized sentences. Working on building complex sentences and using transitional phrases will enhance your writing. Additionally, focusing on descriptive vocabulary will allow you to express your ideas more fully. Great job! I look forward to seeing more progress from you. See you in the next class! ~Jane c\",)
I think smile can sometimes say more than words.
>> I think a smile can sometimes speak more than words.
We have \"Silent is gold\", \"To keep up save words\" in Korea.
>> We have sayings in Korea such as \"Silence is gold\" and \"To keep up, save your words.\"
Sometimes smile is appropriate more than thousand of words.
>> Sometimes a smile is more appropriate than thousands of words.
When I smile in the right place at the right time It could be good influence.
>> When I smile in the right place at the right time it could be a good influence.
Also smile is good expression.
>> Also, smiling is a good expression.
It\'s good for health and sociability.
>> It\'s good for health and socializing.
I\'m not smiling because I\'m happy, I\'m happy because I\'m smiling.
>> CORRECT
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