How can access to devices like smartphones be made secured?
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you once again for this. If companies would be able to come up with secure apps or programs to completely ensure customer\'s secured privacy, it would be quite revolutionary.
- T. Beth
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I think repeated tests are the best way to keep individual information.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I think repeated testing is the best way to keep individual information secured.
when i read the article about the artificial finger frinters, the device only storage a part of finger frinters instead of full.
>>> When I read the article about the artificial fingerprints, the device only store a part of fingerprints instead of full.
before releasing the new device, If they tried to test several times like secure from users position, They would supplement secure problems.
>>> Before releasing the new device, if they tried to test security several times, they would compensate for security problems.
actually, I consider The solutions and supplement are better than developing new system for the secure.
>>> Actually, I consider the solutions and supplementary better than developing new system for security.
In view of past history, the new systems seems to have little problems about the secure.
>>> Looking at the past history, the new systems seems to have little problems about security.
I hope the manufactural to try to several time test to keep information rather than only seeking their sales income.
>>> I hope for the manufacturers to try to test several time in order to keep information safe rather than only seeking for more profit.
I have confidence that the reliable test result will make them to be a leader of industries.
>>> I have confidence that the reliable test result will make them leaders in the industry.
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