How can art be a part of culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that culture and art are the same domain.
Art is based on culture and created.
The other hand, it is difficult to explain when we talk about culture except art.
I want to say culture and art is like our eye and ear.
It is very similar the shapes and sizes and if it separate, we can feel so uncomfortable.
That why I want to say both is the same and it shoud be together.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Miss [이름]. That was a good description.
I think that culture and art are the same domain.
>>> correct
Art is based on culture and created.
Art is based on culture and created.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Art is based on culture and is created.
>>> OR: Art is created based on culture.
The other hand, it is difficult to explain when we talk about culture except art.
>>> On the other hand, it is difficult to explain when we talk about culture except through art.
I want to say culture and art is like our eye and ear.
>>> OR: I want to compare culture and art are like our eye and ear.
It is very similar the shapes and sizes and if it separate, we can feel so uncomfortable.
>>> They are very similar in the shapes and sizes and if separated, we can feel so uncomfortable.
That why I want to say both is the same and it shoud be together.
That why I want to say both is the same and it shoud be together.
>>> That\'s why I want to say both are the same and should be together.
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