How can companies protect their customers’ data from being hacked?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s money problem.
Hacking technology has develped continuously.
If companies want to protect their data from hacker, they also should progress their protecting system.
강사 첨삭
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It\'s money problem.
>> It\'s a money issue.
Hacking technology has develped continuously.
>> Hacking technology has continued to develop.
If companies want to protect their data from hacker, they also should progress their protecting system.
>> If companies want to protect their data from hackers, they also need to keep improving their security systems.
>> It\'s a money issue.
Hacking technology has develped continuously.
>> Hacking technology has continued to develop.
If companies want to protect their data from hacker, they also should progress their protecting system.
>> If companies want to protect their data from hackers, they also need to keep improving their security systems.
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