How can English language help you advance in your career?

2018-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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How can English language help you advance in your career? I love talk to people who different country and my majors are Mandarin and international trade. I love International trade. Since I was kid I want to work that field. English can make me support or help working such as negotiation, E-mail, phone call, writing, presentation and etc. therefore English language is helped me and my career. I wish improve my English skill better than before.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Yeong^^

Please take note all my corrections and please practice your subject verb agreement, articles and your tenses.

Please check your correction below!


I love talk to people who different country and my majors are Mandarin and international trade.

>> I love talking to the people who is living in a different country and my majors are Mandarin and international trade.

I love International trade.

>> I love doing International trade.

Since I was kid I want to work that field.

>>Since I was a kid, I want to work in that field.

English can make me support or help working such as negotiation, E-mail, phone call, writing, presentation and etc. therefore English language is helped me and my career.

>>English can help me to work such as negotiation, sending an E-mail, phone calls, writing, making a presentation and etc. therefore English language is a big help for me and to my career.

 I wish improve my English skill better than before.

>> I wish I can improve my English skills better than before.



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