How can extreme weather conditions affect the economy and social life in countries?

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Climate change is very big problem recently.

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>>Recently, climate change is disturbing.

 It is also called global warming and caused extreme weather.

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 For example, snow was fallen at last April in Korea.

>> For example, snow has fallen last April in Korea.

 It is affected not only temperature but also economy and social life.

>> It has affected not only temperature but also economy and social life.

 First, it damgaed to economy in country.

>> First, it affected the economy of my country.

 Climate change is occured by using fossil fuel like oil and coal.

>>Climate change occurred by using fossil fuel like oil and coal.

So many companies like Apple and Google want companies which transact them to use the renewable engery as a few percent of total energy.

>>So many companies like Apple and Google want companies to transact with them to use the renewable engery as a few percent of total energy.

 If they didn\'t do that, they can\'t transact companies like Apple any more.

>>If they didn\'t do that, they can\'t transact with companies like Apple any more.

 So, it is affected to economic activity.

>>So, it has affected economic activities.

 It is also affected social life.

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It is increased death rate by heat and cold wave all over the world.

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>>Mortality rate increased  by heat and cold wave all over the world.

 Also, many environment problem is occured.

>> Also, many environment problem is occurring.

 Besides, people want the government to prepare the measures.

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 For example, particulate matter is big problem in Korea.

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So, we use a mask more than before and dissel cars can\'t run some day when it is worse.

>>So, we use a mask more than before and diesel cars can\'t run some day when it is worsen.