How can families handle the problem of their child being bullied through social media?
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I have thought that if my children were bullied at school, what could I do. I can\'t find any positive solution about it. Because it is their problem. I don\'t think it is good idea to intervene their problem. If parents try to solve the problem by intervening children\'s relationship, the problem will be more serious. Bullying has been a serious problem in nationwide already. Although our government tried to find the solution, there are still a school bullying,a school violence and sexual harassment. As a parents, the best way to protect their children from the school violence is training them physically and mentally with proper ways. I think that a strict upbringing is the most important factor to save their children from a various threaten. However, if children have been suffering from the school bullying, to contact the professionals or polices and get advice are the choices that parents do.
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I have thought that if my children were bullied at school, what could I do.
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I can\'t find any positive solution about it.
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Because it is their problem.
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I don\'t think it is a good idea to intervene with their problem.
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If parents try to solve the problem by intervening children\'s relationship, the problem will get more serious.
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Bullying has been a serious problem in nationwide already.
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Although our government tried to find a solution, there are still a school bullying, violence and sexual harassment.
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As parents, the best way to protect their children from school violence is training them physically and mentally in proper ways.
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I think that a strict upbringing is the most important factor to save their children from various threats.
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However, if children have been suffering from school bullying, to contact the professionals or polices and get advice are the choices that parents have to do.
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