How can free time activities benefit both mental and physical health?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually play the game in leisure time.
It could reduce many stresses that I recieved.
In other words, enjoying leisure is good for mental health.
Also, if I exercise in free time, I can get many physical benefit.
강사 첨삭
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I usually play the game in leisure time. It could reduce many stresses that I recieved.
>> I usually play games in my leisure time, which helps reduce much of the stress I experience.
In other words, enjoying leisure is good for mental health.
>> In other words, enjoying leisure activities is good for mental health.
Also, if I exercise in free time, I can get many physical benefit.
>> Additionally, if I exercise in my free time, I gain many physical benefits.
>> I usually play games in my leisure time, which helps reduce much of the stress I experience.
In other words, enjoying leisure is good for mental health.
>> In other words, enjoying leisure activities is good for mental health.
Also, if I exercise in free time, I can get many physical benefit.
>> Additionally, if I exercise in my free time, I gain many physical benefits.
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