How can friends have a bad influence on you?

2023-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

It might be hard to believe, but I was a very good child. 😁 I was the leader of my friend\'s group and all of my friends were good kids. I think I made an impact on my friends a bad influence because of alcohol.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ye Na,

I wanted to take a moment to acknowledge the effort you put into completing your homework. It\'s great to see that you took the time to work on it. I appreciate your dedication to your studies. I also wanted to mention that I\'ve always believed that you are a genuinely nice person. Your kindness and positive qualities shine through in our interactions. Keep being your wonderful self, and remember that we all have our own unique journeys and experiences. Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

It might be hard to believe, but I was a very good child.

>>CORRECT

OR>> It might be hard to believe, but I was a very well-behaved child.
I was the leader of my friend\'s group and all of my friends were good kids.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I was the leader of my friend group, and all of my friends were well-behaved kids.
I think I made an impact on my friends a bad influence because of alcohol.

>> CORRECT

OR>> Due to alcohol, I believe I had a negative influence on my friends.

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