How can friends have a bad influence on you? Answer in 3-5 sentences.
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I am [Name]-Young Jun. After getting marriged and giving a birth to three children, I haven\'t had chances to meet people who can be called as my friend. My space and area where I usually walk around are limited to my neighbor, so other mothers and wives had become my friend. But I don\'t think that all of them are not my friends. Anyway, how can they have a bad influence on me? If I devided kinds about them, there are three kinds of group. One group is just normal mothers and wives. They look normal and ordinary. They live their life being humble and not showing off. Next, second group is mothers and wives who would like to buy luxurious clothes, bags, shoes and so on to brag them to other mothers and wives. The last group is mothers and wives who endeavor to raise their children smartly. Their all interests are about their kids study, school life and grades. Second and third group members have a possibility to influence me bad things. So I have been trying to avoid the chance to meet them.
강사 첨삭
Hello So Young!
It\'s good to hear from you today!
Thank you for answering this homework!
It\'s good that you avoid having stressful situations given that you are already tired at home sometimes.
Have a good night!
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I am [Name]-Young Jun.
>>CORRECT
After getting marriged and giving a birth to three children, I haven\'t had chances to meet people who can be called as my friend.
>>After getting married and giving birth to three children, I haven\'t had the chance to meet people who can be called as my \"friend\"
My space and area where I usually walk around are limited to my neighbor, so other mothers and wives had become my friend.
>>The space and area where I usually walk around is limited to my neighbor so, other mothers and wives have become my friends.
But I don\'t think that all of them are not my friends.
>>But I don\'t think that all of them are my friends.
Anyway, how can they have a bad influence on me?
>> CORRECT
If I devided kinds about them, there are three kinds of group.
>>If I divide the kind of people they are, there will be three groups.
One group is just normal mothers and wives.
>>CORRECT
They look normal and ordinary.
>>CORRECT
They live their life being humble and not showing off.
>>CORRECT
Next, second group is mothers and wives who would like to buy luxurious clothes, bags, shoes and so on to brag them to other mothers and wives.
>>The second group of mothers and wives are those who likes buying luxurious clothes, bags, shoes, and so on to brag to other mothers and wives.
The last group is mothers and wives who endeavor to raise their children smartly.
>>The last group of mothers and wives are on an endeavor to raise their children in a smart manner.
Their all interests are about their kids study, school life and grades.
>> Their interest only includes their kids studies, school life and grades.
Second and third group members have a possibility to influence me bad things.
>>The second and third group can possibly have a bad influence on me.
So I have been trying to avoid the chance to meet them.
>>So, I have been trying to avoid any chances of meeting them.
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