How can getting older help people understand life better?
학생이 쓴 원문
Getting older, people have many experiences and they naturally learn empathy and consideration to others.
It help people understand life.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
Getting older, people have many experiences and they naturally learn empathy and consideration to others.
As people get older, they gain many experiences and naturally learn empathy and consideration for others.
It help people understand life.
This helps them better understand life.
As people get older, they gain many experiences and naturally learn empathy and consideration for others.
It help people understand life.
This helps them better understand life.
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