How can governments educate people, especially children, about the harm cyber-bullying does?
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cyber-bullying causes another criminal. the victims from cyber-bullying have a possiblity of getting a deprassion and social pobia.
So, the goverments must educate people seriousness of cyber-bullying. especially, they help people should be distinguished between fun and crime.
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cyber-bullying causes another criminal.
>>> Cyber-bullying causes crime.
the victims from cyber-bullying have a possiblity of getting a deprassion and social pobia.
>>> The victims from cyber-bullying have the possibility of getting depression and social phobia.
So, the goverments must educate people seriousness of cyber-bullying. especially, they help people should be distinguished between fun and crime.
So, the goverments must educate people seriousness of cyber-bullying. especially, they help people should be distinguished between fun and crime.
>>> So, the government must educate people seriously about cyber-bullying. especially, they help people should be distinguished between fun and crime.
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