How can I help the environment become clean?

2019-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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People have to protect the environment. So I usually try to do somethings. First, I use the tumbler everyday. Except cafe take out, I don\'t use papercup or plastic cup. Second, I eat food which I can eat. I try to prepare food which I can eat. But, At school, food maker give much food which I can\'t eat. So usually I make food trash. So usually, I fell guilty. Third, we have to reduce the clothes. I heard clothes make much trash and environment pollution. So we buy the clothes which I need. But this is very hard to me. So I try to do... Thanks! :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for making your homework! Good job! :)


People have to protect the environment.

>>> CORRECT!


 So I usually try to do somethings.

>>> So I usually try to do some things.


 First, I use the tumbler everyday.

>>> CORRECT!


Except cafe take out,

>>> Except for take out in cafes.


I don\'t use papercup or plastic cup.

>>> CORRECT!


 Second, I eat food which I can eat.

>>> CORRECT!


I try to prepare food which I can eat.

>>> CORRECT!


But, At school, food maker give much food which I can\'t eat.

>>> But in school, people who prepare the meal serve more than I can eat.


So usually I make food trash.

>>> I usually have a lot of left over.


 So usually, I fell guilty.

>>> That makes me feel guilty sometimes.


 Third, we have to reduce the clothes.

>>> Third, we have to reduce the clothes that we use.


I heard clothes make much trash and environment pollution.

>>> CORRECT!


 So we buy the clothes which I need.

>>> So I buy the clothes that I just need.


But this is very hard to me.

>>> But it is really hard for me to do.


So I try to do...

>>> I am still trying my best to do it.


 Thanks! :)


_T MICHELLE

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