How can I help the environment become clean?
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People have to protect the environment.
>>> CORRECT!
So I usually try to do somethings.
>>> So I usually try to do some things.
First, I use the tumbler everyday.
>>> CORRECT!
Except cafe take out,
>>> Except for take out in cafes.
I don\'t use papercup or plastic cup.
>>> CORRECT!
Second, I eat food which I can eat.
>>> CORRECT!
I try to prepare food which I can eat.
>>> CORRECT!
But, At school, food maker give much food which I can\'t eat.
>>> But in school, people who prepare the meal serve more than I can eat.
So usually I make food trash.
>>> I usually have a lot of left over.
So usually, I fell guilty.
>>> That makes me feel guilty sometimes.
Third, we have to reduce the clothes.
>>> Third, we have to reduce the clothes that we use.
I heard clothes make much trash and environment pollution.
>>> CORRECT!
So we buy the clothes which I need.
>>> So I buy the clothes that I just need.
But this is very hard to me.
>>> But it is really hard for me to do.
So I try to do...
>>> I am still trying my best to do it.
Thanks! :)
_T MICHELLE
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