How can I relieve stress.
학생이 쓴 원문
I relieve stress to play some video games.
Second, I relieve stress to go outside.
Third, I relieve stress to play with my friends.
Finally, I relieve stress to read some books.
강사 첨삭
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- T. Rina
1. I relieve stress to play some video games.
>> I play some video games to relieve stress.
2. Second, I relieve stress to go outside.
>> Second, I go outside to relieve stress.
3. Third, I relieve stress to play with my friends.
>> Third, I play with my friends to relieve stress.
4. Finally, I relieve stress to read some books.
>> Finally, I read some book to relieve stress.
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