How can music help with motivation during different activities?
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We can use the music as a motivation for our lives.
For example, when we are depressed the music could make us happy.
We can also use the music like a back ground music in a cinema, when we need a power.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your opinion about how music can help motivate us during different activities.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
We can use the music as a motivation for our lives.
>>We can use music as motivation in our lives.
For example, when we are depressed the music could make us happy.
For example, when we are depressed the music could make us happy.
>>For example, when we are depressed, music can make us happy.
We can also use the music like a back ground music in a cinema, when we need a power.
We can also use the music like a back ground music in a cinema, when we need a power.
>>We can also use music as background music in a cinema when we need motivation.
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