How can New Year's resolutions help you in the coming year?

2015-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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As most companies set up business plans and budgets annually based on the calendar year, we as an individual need to do the same in order to manage time more effectively and to develop ourselves further. We need to break down time as appropriately as possible such as weekly, monthly, quarterly, or yearly based on your own purpose and give our own meaning to the time line.In that way, we can set your goal by a certain time line and track and review the progress accordingly. Otherwise, we would tend to procrastinate things we have to do by the given time. It applies to New Year’s resolutions too. Actually Jan. 1 of a new year is one of those too many ordinary days.It is nothing special unless we do not give a special meaning to the day. We tend to be not aware of the importance of time if we do not intentionally divide time into pieces. A new day, a new month, and a new year are all something that makes us restart new things. As a new year starts, let's make resolutions and achieve them

강사 첨삭

Good day Sir [이름]!

Thanks for a majestic essay.

We really need to set our goals for this year.

We should not only make plans but we should strive harder to achieve those.

Time is gold. Let us make the most of our time like what you mentioned in our previous classes.

Take the opportunity to be better and have a wonderful time.

Teacher Nina


As most companies set up business plans and budgets annually based on the calendar year, we as an individual need to do the same in order to manage time more effectively and to develop ourselves further.

>> CORRECT

We need to break down time as appropriately as possible such as weekly, monthly, quarterly, or yearly based on your own purpose and give our own meaning to the time line.

>> We need to break down time as appropriately as possible such as weekly, monthly, quarterly or yearly based on our purpose and meaning to the timeline.

In that way, we can set your goal by a certain time line and track and review the progress accordingly.

>> In that way, we can set our goals in a certain time line, track and review the progress accordingly.

Otherwise, we would tend to procrastinate things we have to do by the given time.

>> CORRECT

It applies to New Year’s resolutions too.

>> CORRECT

Actually Jan. 1 of a new year is one of those too many ordinary days.

>> CORRECT

It is nothing special unless we do not give a special meaning to the day.

>> CORRECT

We tend to be not aware of the importance of time if we do not intentionally divide time into pieces.

>> CORRECT

A new day, a new month, and a new year are all something that makes us restart new things.

>> CORRECT

As a new year starts, let\'s make resolutions and achieve them

>> CORRECT

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